Tuesday, March 29, 2011

My eyes are knives
they hit my lungs and puncture
I am balloon splinters:
Rotate, turn, and break.
I am film covered and bubbling
don't you see?
We smile through the churning
the clattering spines
We line up and bellow
Hair flipped examinations
yellow pearly daggers
popping holes inside my mind.

(Hello my fellow writers :) Just a reminder to any new followers that if you would like to become an author you can post your email in a comment or send it to me at sernityr101@sbcglobal.net and I'll add you ASAP. Also, I was wondering if anyone would like to start doing something new like posting writing prompts and seeing what we can come up with. It's fantastic excersise and I haven't thought through how we would do it, but I was wondering if anyone would be interested in that? Let me know!
Love you all,


  1. This is spellbinding. I love the phrase "balloon splinters"! That is so creative.

    I think writing prompts would be fun! I don't know how good I'd be at coming up with them, though since I've had very little experience with them. (I actually had to google it to make sure of what it was, haha.) But I could try if you need me to!

  2. This is really good, I really like the "don't you see?" part. :)

    I'm with Melee, I like the idea as well. They seem to work well with the writing class I take at school, and it's always interesting to see the way people respond differently to the prompts. I'm in :)

  3. Your words are amazing.... <3 beautiful and pure...

  4. This is a very cool post. Writer's unite XD